LadyPurple

Hey there Junaid. You seem nice :D . I hope I get to see you around here sometime! Welcome to the Young Writers society Or, YWS. It's ok if you ...

Hey there Solv! Congratulations on the third chapter! I liked it pretty well. But I found these nit-picks. Hi, here this is the 2nd draft of this chapter. :D If ...

Hey Josh. Welcome to YWS (again). Well I really don't like to read things on here when they're that long but I did. It has potential! The above comments pointed ...

Hiya Fireandice. I like this. I can relate (except for the you know...being dead part.) I don't reallyhave much to say really...But keep writing. ~Ladypurple.

I like this a lot. It's so passionate. Also, very pretty. I hope you write more! That was all that mattered, as long as we believed in each other . ...

Hiya Beccalicious. Looks like I'll be your critique person tonight. I found a little nit pick. People call me foolish or delusional for describing what isn’t there When all you ...

Hiya, Josh. I'm Ladypurple. Welcome to the strange place know as YWS! I noticed you like Fantasy (I do too.) Also I saw how many books you own.... Wow.... A ...

It cuts off at the bottom but oh well. So awesome! I can't draw at all.

Hiya Panda326. Ladypurple at your service! OK I found a few spelling and grammar-ish errors. Things in paretheses are the errors. Colors aren't working for me now. Ending at a ...

Hiya, Aouther2b. I read this and was like..."ooh that's sad." That's never happened to me before but still I've heard about this happening to some people in my school. But ...

Hiya Desire. I think I've reviewed something you wrote. Well wanyway, welcome to YWS!! You seem very cool I like anime too and poetry. I hope you have a nice ...

Hiya desiredanime25. I liked this. I just found two spots in need of tweaking. And I remember how you smelt Smelt just sounds a little...weird. Tried smelled. And oh, how ...

I like your poem mostly because it's really true. Girls go through a lot. I like the flow but it kind of sounded cliche in the begginging. But sometimes it ...

Hiya Wish. I read this and said "Aww." This is really cute and I like it. The thing about review Sunday is when you go to review, it turns out ...

I was traveling through a happy land, listening to my favorite band. But I looked down and saw the sand, looking all dark and tanned. There was an arch and ...