LadyPurple

Hi Amandajo I'll be your reviewer today. I like this piece. None of the stanzas really seemed forced to me. It closing behind me, with barely a mark. Try re-wording ...

Hiya DrowningInDarkness. I like how you started. I'm interested now. I'm guessing you'll explain why the killer killed the girl later on. So I'll just move on. You have no ...

Hey Jemjive. 1. Ooh pretty! 2. you needed to change the angle. 3. The color in the clouds are pretty. 4. The colors look kind of edited. It may be ...

Aw I felt sorry for the boy. Why did his daddy call social services? Like Shepard said, I thought he was protective of his child. I love this piece. It's ...

Hi Ariberry. I just wanna point out a few spelling errors in this. I wake up, get ready, eat my food, and just feel blank. My mind goes on a ...

Wow. It took me a second to figure out what this said. Very clever, xjpalladinix. I see no grammar or spelling errors. Good work I hope you write more. ~Ladypurple.

Hey Goodnitekissforme. It's nice to meet a (kind of) new person. I'm a Harry Potter fan, likes soccer, music (pop rock and a little country, hip hop, and RnB).. Eh. ...

Hey there KAH. First off, when it comes to spelling or grammar errors I found a few. They're in red. Stay away from me I need you too badly I ...

Oh yeah this is a great idea except for the fact that no one this website is actually comedic meaning its probably going to be pretty hard for you guys ...

Hiya Kitty! I love the flow. The message is good. originality you've got none, poetry like this is dead and the only people who read it are teachers and other ...

Like I'm gonna puke my meal, meal, meal, meal, I really don't want to, to, to, to, But I lean over and do, do, do, do, That part was hilarious. ...

Granted, but when you lick the ice cream you freeze up and are stuck there in un melting ice forever. I wish I could read minds.

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Ha America's got talent only in fiction could this notion be even little bit believable Excuse me? Who are you to talk? It's one thing to express yourself...But I think ...

Hi! I just ruined my hair making myself a bang! But your hair is so pretty!