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Re: Naming a story.
So far I've come to the conclusion of just naming my novel Tara. That is because I am not clever with names. I kinda don't like Tara being the name ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
I have two different shaped thumbs.
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: How Helpful is YWS??
In the end, YWS can not do all the work for you. it is not the job of YWS to tell you what to do, it is not supposed to ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Beyond return. (First post on YWS!)
Hi Soulsaver. Welcome to YWS! Anyway, you've got some fairly good help from the people above me so all I have to say is: I like this poem. The rhyming ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: YWS (parody of Y.M.C.A)
Haha. I love it. Good job, Tam. ~Ladypurple~
Aug 24, 2010 -
Re: Hello! Hello's for everyone!
Hey Maddoxpatt! I'm Ladypurple. You sound nice. So, what kind of stories do you write? I'd be glad to read whatever you post! Also, you'll get plenty of advice here. ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Help me mummy
Hiya Retrodisco. I found a few grammar and spelling errors. "Troops brace yourself!" Captain - shouted. He was stood at the front of the boat as we approached the sure. ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: "El Morro" San Juan, Puerto Rico
I like them. I also don't have much to say.... But I like the second to last pictures because of the angle.
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Hi Everyone.
Hi Relentless27. I'm Ladypurple and welcome to YWS! I'm looking forward to your work here. If you need something just private message me!
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Your favourite fairytale?
Alice in Wonderland if that counts. I could watch it over and over again!
Aug 14, 2010 -
Re: One Last Song
That's a really sweet story. I can't find anything really wrong with this. I wrote a series of bedtime stories for a girl I enjoyed. She's gone, but the words ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Scarlet Killer~2
This is a change of prescpetive. 1 In life, there are some things you regret, some you forget, and some you can’t get your mind off of. I was five ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Charlie Manning
Hey there LiveLaughLove. I found some spelling and a few grammar-ish errors. This is a kinds random piece that I wrote and I'm not sure what to do with it. ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: Broken
Hey DisturbedDisorder. I didn't see any errors. Okay, So this is the first time I've really tried to do a non- rhyming poem, If it flows this good it doesn't ...
Aug 12, 2010 -
Re: The Moon's Jealous Revenge
Hey. I couldn't find any errors in this! I like this. I like that you told how the other planets couldn't do much. Very creative, Good job! ~Ladypurple.
Aug 12, 2010
