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Re: Hate You for Loving You
Hiya. I found some parts to be repetitive. I found it slightly boring. The emotion is not right.. let's just say that. I'm never good at reviewing poems. But I ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: It's not real... editing currently unfinished
IT'S NOT REAL.... CHAPTER ONE MODERN DRACULA I have started to create a telepathic like close relationship with the evening bats that frequent the night sky, I have been pondering ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: abuse part 2
read my poem abuse first if you want the full thing I come back to the dirty little shack I left her in she is still there. Lying very still ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Some New Photos
hey Vitamincake! I'll be reviewing these pictures for you. I like them. You made them? They are very nice. I really can't say much... But the last one is really ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Nickname the user above you!
Dapple Don't understand that one... But oh well. lilgreendots greedolilts All I could come up with that made sense... Failed one: lilsgretendo
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: What are you eating?
Ice
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: The Tavern
Ladypurple didn't know there was a pool. Must have been recently added... "Hey," she said.
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Sun
That is veeeery big. But I think it's pretty neat! It looks nice with the color too and the background. I haven't much to say since this is art except ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Hi. i am the main character as you may know and i will go ahead and worn you about the flollowing: Sotry mai contan: -random changing of POV without warning ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
"FOget you!' i shouted to the manager as i stormed out. i am the best person In TnhWE wORld And not a souL Can Say otherwise because i am greetness ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: A random fact about yourself
I wrote a crappy play called, "The only chance." It was written in 7th grade and inspired by Club Penguin.
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [4]
I... don't get it... But i't's cool! 7/10
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Sex In Books (Opinion)
I think it depends. If it's... let's say... some book about teenage pregnancy then I find nothing wrong with it in those. I have a sex scene in my own ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: What are you eating?
Lemon.
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: he can not hear
i will repeat it again. I am Italian, it is obvious that it is not grammatically correct in English. these translations are made by a machine translation, taken from Italian. ...
Nov 21, 2010
