LadyPurple

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'Ello! You seem like a fairly new person. Welcome! I'm LadyPurple and I'm here to review. Haha okay then. Nothing is wrong, really except one thing. Overall, the whole thing ...

Hey! *Puts on reviewing cape* You heart wasn't quite ready I think you forgot the "r" in your. that's all I could find, really. Probably because my reviewing-ness got rusty... ...

Tear it to little bits and shreads. Bite my head off if you need to 'cause I want to improve :P *edit: not sure...I tried moving some words around and ...

Forks.

The letter C. -Blocks-

The only YWSers I know are the ones I invited to the site. Not any of you people though.

Wow. W-O-W! Is there more to this? Lol onto my reviewing. Okay, so I noticed that you left out a space somewhere along the line and while you were in ...

I won't be able to this year....but next time!

This. Is. Awesome. Cool perspective of vampirism! Screw the sparkly vampires, this is better. :)

In the second stanza, the narrator is reminiscing - going through different stages of her life and experiences. The first stage shown is childhood. We are given evidence of this ...

Wow. Bravo! That's so...sad:( but you did terrific with this. I hope there's more to this. The only problem I see is that you confused the "your" with "you're" in ...

This is mine in a tile formation:) rawrrrrr.jpg

*Tries again* oladypurploe YES!!!! Good enough for me!

You're a tad too young for the site. Maybe you should wait till you're older to take on YWS. Then you'll have grew in your writing skills as well because ...