LadyOkra

Thanks a lot! :) I'll do my best to improve.

Thank you! I'll try and improve. :)

Thank you! Yes, I tend to write a lot of dialogues. I shall improve on it. :)

Thanks so much! I really appreciate you taking time to leave behind such a detailed review! :)

Than you very much for the detailed review. I really appreciate it. :)

Thank you very much for the feedback! :) I'll take your suggestion into consideration. Thanks a lot.

Yes, as you have pointed it out rightly, it is classified as a "phobia", which I think is very unjust. Thank you very much for the feedback! I'll definitely take ...

Thanks very much for the feedback! :)

and were entranced by one another and by the fruit you held in your hand. How beautiful. I think you're an absolutely wonderful writer.

I shouldn't be cackling like a crazed cuckoo but here I am, doing just that. I feel rather sorry for Mrs. Marge and am ashamed at myself for laughing so ...

Thank you! Thank you very very much. The things that you have noticed, I hadn't noticed at all. Makes me feel silly. But thank you so much for such a ...

Thank you very much for the positive feedback! I really appreciate it. I'm glad to have evoked some sort of emotion in you, albeit sad. What made you write this ...

An interesting concept! I like the fact that it is quite useful. I love the characters. "Gram R. Nazi" cracked me up for sure. I love how you have made ...

Thanks a lot for the suggestion! I'll try and fix it. :)

Sorry for spamming so much, but I couldn't place this feeling I had earlier! Your work reminds me a lot of Isaac Asimov's work. There's a human touch to your ...