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Re: I was dreaming the night he died
Hey, I started reading feeling I knew the pace and then trailed off concentrating more on all of the descriptions. The ideas are awesome and the way you write is ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Beauty and The Beast
Hey, This is a really beautiful idea. I love the setting and the tone of the story, a very modern and yet still traditional retelling of a famous tale! I ...
Oct 3, 2011 -
Re: Midnight Dance
Tense, mysterious and well written. I like the style. Questioning the reader throughout. This is a particular style I myself enjoy writing and therefore appreciate how you structure and executed ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: The History of Windriders
Hey, This is a brilliant idea and an interesting read! Aside from the grammar mistakes already mentioned I think you just need to go back through your work and address ...
Feb 11, 2011