LadyLucifer21

Hey, I started reading feeling I knew the pace and then trailed off concentrating more on all of the descriptions. The ideas are awesome and the way you write is ...

Fire and ice coinciding simultaneously. If you weren't in an area whiter than the pale horse, and colder than its tiny ice ridden heart, you were faced with tremendous tongues ...

Hey, This piece was written for another user, s/he asked for a description of the underworld (hence the lack of character). I wrote it quite quickly and didn't really want ...

Thank you! It's always good to get a second pair of eyes on a piece! I know about the tense change because I was struggling with it a bit. I ...

Fire and ice coinciding simultaneously. If you weren't in an area whiter than the pale horse, and colder than it's tiny ice ridden heart you were faced with tremendous tongues ...

Hey, This is a really beautiful idea. I love the setting and the tone of the story, a very modern and yet still traditional retelling of a famous tale! I ...

The wind whistles through the gaps in the metal, ducking beneath lights and rolling over steel. To the East the sky is clear, mulled wine clouds set against the grey ...

Tense, mysterious and well written. I like the style. Questioning the reader throughout. This is a particular style I myself enjoy writing and therefore appreciate how you structure and executed ...

Hey, This is a brilliant idea and an interesting read! Aside from the grammar mistakes already mentioned I think you just need to go back through your work and address ...

Hey, I am pretty new to this site but this sounds like a great project for me! Which is the current logo is it your display picture on here or ...