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Re: Ballad of the Blood (0)
I really enjoyed this story! Good job!
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Lemongrass
It was very good. I just have one concern. I didn't think it fit together very well. Work on trying to get the poem to all fit into one. :) ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: The Nighttime Sky.
The Nighttime Sky. I step out of the golden Chevrolet. I take a deep breath. I smell the smells, of the nighttime sky. Fresh cut grass. Newly bailed hay. And ...
Oct 4, 2009