LadyJackalope

Amber smiled thoughtfully at Thytes and took a long swig from her hot chocolate before replying, "First, I believe if anyone is impeding the group, it most definitely is not ...

Amber heard the word chocolate and was suddenly blind to everything around her. She quickly crossed the room, sidestepping Mage and Knight to grab a mug. She closed her eyes ...

Just posted. Sorry if it's a bit rough, this is my first Storybook and I'm still trying to get into the swing of things!

Amelia Evenstar: Introduction I've always been smart. Scary smart. Unnervingly smart and perceptive if you asked my thirty-six sets of foster parents. Even though I'm only eight, I'm good at ...

Amber breathed (breathed!) a sigh of relief as she saw that Thytes' wooden body was the only thing that had been harmed by the sword. The initial relief dissipated into ...

Body after body clattered to the ground around Amber. She tried to concentrate on her own body, to visualize it and bring it to life, but she kept getting distracted ...

Amber watched as the reaper opened a rift in the air and people began to step through it. She still couldn't bring herself to trust the reapers and the thought ...

It looks like you took it down? I'll be happy to review it when/if you put it back up!

Amber was thoroughly ashamed of herself. She had followed the others towards the source of the commotion but as soon as she had seen the fire and then seen how ...

Amber looked about herself in awe. The booths reminded her of the Marketplace but she had never seen anything like those towering rusting figures of twisted metal. She was still ...

Ah, right. She hadn't introduced herself. Normally she might not have shared her name, dryad names were personal things, but she felt she owed it to Mage considering she had ...

Amber quietly followed in the direction they led. She wondered why Knight was the only one who had been able to listen to his soul so far. She wondered, briefly, ...

Amber closed her nonexistent eyes, it felt natural to her because of her many years doing exactly that as a tree, and tried to imagine her soul, to listen to ...

Amber relaxed, more because of the kindness in Knight's voice than anything else and listened to them talk while she tried to place the words Thytes had said. She understood ...

Hi! I'd be happy to help out anyone who wants a review for their short story/novel. I don't do poetry, lyrics, plays, etc. as I don't know what I'm talking ...