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LadyEvvy

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Candy Caper Chapter 2

    It would be a really cool thing for Schadel if something people would consider a weakness worked in his favor. Like if there were an antagonist that could turn magic ...

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Six

    You can put a variation of Claire in each story to make it more subtle. Claret for The Schadel Files, Claire for Sunrise. Clara, Clarissa, Eclair. The possibilities are endless. ...

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Six

    Claire is an excellent name! A couple years ago I had a minor obsession with the name Ginger. Almost every story I came up with had a Ginger in it ...

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Candy Caper Chapter 2

    Personally, I think Schadel should stay the youngest, unless you have specific plans that involve someone who has to be younger. It adds to what a cute character he is. ...

    Nov 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Six

    Yup, Elena is Evvy, but I'm thinking of changing her name, just so Eva and Evvy don't get mixed up. That and Elena and I are really too different to ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Candy Caper Chapter 2

    Don't know where you're going until you get there! Schadel is the best. It's kind of fitting that he's the youngest Grim Reaper, since he seems to be in that ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Six

    Calm down! If you can't handle this plot twist, the next one will definitely be too much. What am I supposed to do then? Air of mystery, good! I'm worried ...

    Nov 5, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Candy Caper Chapter 1

    How intriguing. A truly exquisite foreshadowing technique, simply saying "it's going to be bad" in the comments section. :) Maybe because people use "enthusiastically" a bit less than they use ...

    Nov 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Candy Caper Chapter 1

    Poor Chi, poor Schadel. Only Claret is happy in this universe. Why would you take out "excitedly"? It would work just as well as "enthusiastically." Your welcome! I'll keep my ...

    Nov 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 7

    I'm sure we all have tons of free time, but we're all internet addicts, so we waste that time and say we never had it. So I suppose it's not ...

    Nov 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Five

    You're totally fine! Thanks for the encouragement! I just feel like as the story focus moves from characters to plot, it might go downhill, just a little. I won't quit, ...

    Nov 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Five

    Yes, I do, but I have other reasons! I don't want people to forget her! I don't trust other peoples' memories very much. Stupid plot holes! Why can't they just ...

    Nov 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 7

    A lot of stories I've written in the past began as school assignments. A novel can come from anywhere, really! Well, I'll just have to wait until we meet her ...

    Nov 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Tower's Magic ― Chapter Five

    It's not good, that's the point! :D My goodness, I've written something that is even remotely connected to Bartimaeus and I'm so proud of myself! You, however, are edging dangerously ...

    Nov 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 7

    First case: candy is stolen. Second case: someone is dead. A rather wild change in tone there, huh? I like it! Well, now I want to see more of Blanx! ...

    Nov 2, 2015


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