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Re: The Hybrids (chapter 3)
Hi jls1638! LadyArtemis here to review. First thing first, I really love this chapter! The way that you portrayed Sarah is absolutely amazing. I like the way that you include ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: Highway Part 1
Hi Storygirl. Nice to meet you. Anyways, I actually don't mind reading a long story like this. This story was very entertaining in my opinion. The way that you compared ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: Confessions of an Unconscious Murderer
First off to say I love the title. It's different from others I've read. Titles like this is what grabs readers' attention. Love how you described Grant and Renalds. I ...
Oct 17, 2013 -
Re: The perfect night.
First thing first. I liked the description of this chapter. Very interesting and eye catching. Although, I did see a few mistakes that you could fix up. There were errors ...
Oct 15, 2013