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You Loved me. The l in loved needs to be lower case. Or so I thought.... This part seems to interrupt the story. As the narrator is shocked by the ...

They called us the dumpster kids, the ones with a box full of dreams. Kind of ironic, I guess. We lived on our dreams, Jodie. As long as we had ...

Hello! I'm Lacey and I'll be reviewing today! I hope I can help. I put needed punctuation in bold, and made them red, inside of the quotes. I met you ...

Before I start this review, I must proclaim my love for this poem. It reminds me, in some way, of the psalms King David wrote. Full of his mistakes and ...

Hello! I'm Lacey and I'll be ripping this...er...critiquing this poem today. *cough* Before I do 'red pen' this, I would like to assure you that I really liked it. Now ...

Hi. I'm Lacey and I'll be reviewing your poem today. (That sounds like I'm a plane captain :D) I put punctuation in different colors in the quote and any comments ...