LUNARGIRL

Great job on this even if it was a school assignment. I recommend though that you italicize the names of the people who are about to speak. One thing I ...

Great job on it. One thing I must say is that when you write a script, since people are speaking it. It is more about the actions and what they ...

I really liked this poem. I loved how it talked about change, and that something new was going to happen. I loved when it said "Change will come, it always ...