LJM368

Hey, ali. Thanks for reviewing again! I originally wrote this for a online writing contest, and its meant to be an excerpt from a novel chapter. I have a vague ...

Thank you for your review! I'm happy to hear it made you want to read more. Unfortunately, I only have a vague sense of where I would take this as ...

Thanks so much for the review! I know the title isn't that great, I always suck at thinking of them, and it will change once I think of a new ...

Thanks for the review! I just changed what you suggested, and you were right. Thanks again. :)