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the words that you used made it a beautiful visual. It stiirs a warm emotion in the heart

When Erik was only eight he was unfortunate enough to be robbed of something precious ,his family, someone who would love and protect him no matter what he did... "Come ...

I really like the vivid descriptions and the brutal honesty of the words. It is like a void that has become part of everyday life that nothing but what was ...

Like in the first part of the story you need to be careful with the tenses, but I really liked your story. Also be careful where you put 'in' some ...

I really liked the description of the man's personality and how you didn't reveal too much about why each of them came to be in the same place.I also really ...

I really liked the description of the man's personality and how you didn't reveal too much about why each of them came to be in the same place.I also really ...

"Please don't leave me," Jessie begged, the handcuffs restricting her to the small corner that smelled of mildew and stagnant water. Her faceless captor laughed mercilessly before the door clanged ...