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I really liked Olivia, she was a really strong character... creepy but strong and interesting. Someone should have told her that it isn't good to bottle things up inside, because ...

I really like the descriptions in the poem. I found it a little cryptic myself, but good all the same. "And the tundra's kiss you will find beneath each bed ...

sorry about the first line it just won't stay where I put it grrr :(

The mindful eyes of the forest stand on the hill,strong and sure. Watching, watching Unable to warn of a fiery danger surging across the sea of leaves The cries of ...

I agree with Sionarama it is a very good piece. I liked the imagery that the words invoked in my mind. I reall liked the last stanza "Until that day ...

Thank you. all of the comments and critiques.

I really liked this work. I thought it was sad that she felt that she had to perfect her work because her parents would not accept any less. Emily is ...

I know you don't really get much of a feel for the characters but I wrote another version and just introduced all the characters at once and a lot of ...

Hey awesome story. as you know I love it

"Please don't leave me," Jessie begged the handcuffs restricting her to the small corner that smelled of mildew and stagnant water. Her faceless captor laughed mercilessly before the door clanged ...

Hey I love your poem but you already knew that. I like the idea and the thought behind it.

Hey I love your poem but you already knew that. I like the idea and the thought behind it.

"What things?" she inquired while turning down Rodriguez Street. "The night that those two men killed my parents, they beat and raped my mother," He continued,"When I saw him hit ...

I agree with both lavabubblingout and Eraqio on the fact that I didn't really feel the relief or anything that the character was supposed to be feeling but the descriptions ...

I really liked it. It was really sad, but I thought it was very interesting. I think the whole critters thing was both creepy and cool. I'm excited about reading ...