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Re: Hey All :)
hey, nice to make your aquantance Midnight. If you ever need anybody to review anything just let me know and I'd be more than happy to do so. :D
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: The Battle Within*Revised*
That was a very unique way of describing what was going on with the lady knight, but like your other reviewer said I didn't really understand why the other knight ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 1
this is a very interesting concept. I see why you put that first part in but I don't know that it was really all that necessary, it made it kind ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: "The Glass Ballerina"
As you know I love your stories. I miss seeing and reading your stuff.
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: The Hunger games-Rue- Part one
one I'd just love to say that that like Zibbe I was glad for the alternate ending I was so sad when Rue died. I have to agree that you ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: The diary of a depressed Egyptian girl
I'd like to say that I started reading this and it didn't really grab at my attention. When I read it I also felt like the atmosphere was so unhappy ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Gale-A hunger Games fanfic
Okay first off I would like to say that was really cute. I couldn'thave imagined a more perfect girl for Gale, but I just felt like it was a little ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Elyse- Chapter 1
okay like Blink said it feels rushed and doesn't really flow well. I would really like to say I got something from the character,but I didn't I mean you implied ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: The Eye
Okay first off I want to say I really love the way you described the concert and atmosphere. The guy that came into is a seemingly interesting character and explained ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: The Eye
Okay first off I want to say I really love the way you described the concert and atmosphere. The guy that came into is a seemingly interesting character and explained ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Blood Red
like smanda14 said it is very hard to say where this is going and it feels as if it is only an introduction and I would like to see a ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: The House of the Mind
Okay I just don't really understand where this was going. I mean it didn't feel smooth saw the compare and contrast of the cop and Eric.... but after that I ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: poetry
Oh my gosh this is one of the best pieces of poetry I have ever had the honor of reading... thank you
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Fearless
Okay I like the concept behind this and I really like the feel of Sammy's character so innocent. But just a few things I'd like to point out... I would ...
Jul 21, 2010 -
Re: Papa
Thank you it helps a lot.
Jul 14, 2010
