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  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey All :)

    hey, nice to make your aquantance Midnight. If you ever need anybody to review anything just let me know and I'd be more than happy to do so. :D

    Jun 20, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Battle Within*Revised*

    That was a very unique way of describing what was going on with the lady knight, but like your other reviewer said I didn't really understand why the other knight ...

    Jun 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Here There Be Dragons [edit] - 1

    this is a very interesting concept. I see why you put that first part in but I don't know that it was really all that necessary, it made it kind ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: "The Glass Ballerina"

    As you know I love your stories. I miss seeing and reading your stuff.

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: The Hunger games-Rue- Part one

    one I'd just love to say that that like Zibbe I was glad for the alternate ending I was so sad when Rue died. I have to agree that you ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The diary of a depressed Egyptian girl

    I'd like to say that I started reading this and it didn't really grab at my attention. When I read it I also felt like the atmosphere was so unhappy ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Gale-A hunger Games fanfic

    Okay first off I would like to say that was really cute. I couldn'thave imagined a more perfect girl for Gale, but I just felt like it was a little ...

    Jan 29, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Elyse- Chapter 1

    okay like Blink said it feels rushed and doesn't really flow well. I would really like to say I got something from the character,but I didn't I mean you implied ...

    Jul 24, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Eye

    Okay first off I want to say I really love the way you described the concert and atmosphere. The guy that came into is a seemingly interesting character and explained ...

    Jul 24, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Eye

    Okay first off I want to say I really love the way you described the concert and atmosphere. The guy that came into is a seemingly interesting character and explained ...

    Jul 24, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Blood Red

    like smanda14 said it is very hard to say where this is going and it feels as if it is only an introduction and I would like to see a ...

    Jul 22, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The House of the Mind

    Okay I just don't really understand where this was going. I mean it didn't feel smooth saw the compare and contrast of the cop and Eric.... but after that I ...

    Jul 22, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: poetry

    Oh my gosh this is one of the best pieces of poetry I have ever had the honor of reading... thank you

    Jul 21, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Fearless

    Okay I like the concept behind this and I really like the feel of Sammy's character so innocent. But just a few things I'd like to point out... I would ...

    Jul 21, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Papa

    Thank you it helps a lot.

    Jul 14, 2010


Be happy, my friend; and if you obey me in this one request, remain satisfied that nothing on earth will have the power to interrupt my tranquility.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein