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5/10 it doesn't really make me say, "I have to read that." "Why have you come here Hag?"

Hello I have been on and off this site for about three or four years. whew that's a long time, but I hope that I can continue to do so! ...

Hello my name is Lila and I am in exile for a crime I didn't commit.

I use it to express myself.

"Don don't do it," Ember pleaded.

You know you're a writer when you wake up in the middle of the night from a dream to write it down because it would make a great story.

this piece of work is both sad and very touching. When I started reading it I felt the pain in it as if it were my own. It was beautifully ...

an excellent piece of work. Very powerful and honest it makes one think about the way I felt if I lost someone.

you sent a very powerful message in your poem. I think that is a secret wish of everyone except for those who wish to inflict pain on others. It was ...

hi. Welcome to the young writers society. I'm not new here but I'm still learning, but if there's anything you wanna ask about I'll do my best to guide you. ...

I really like the description of the knights in the first part but after that I didn't really get that on the rest of the story. I wasn't really sure ...

I think that is a very interesting take on temptation an d how it affects people. And the description was fantastic

I agree with Nance, Drew even if he does feel remorse something about him seems off... maybe I'm just being paranoid for her. So please ignore my comment on the ...

I really like the sense of foreboding that is created by your character not being able to sleep and preparing herself for what she subconsciously knew was coming, but something ...

This is a very unique story and I like the authenticity of your story. It was a privilege to read it. I'm interested to see why Ira was so evil ...