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Re: My Rose
Ummm... yeahhh... randomness... There's a certain person I want to guess about it... A burning rose Hidden by a shield Only a shadow seen by outsiders A smile A laugh ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: I Hate Acrostic Poems (Winter)
This poem... wow, it's beautiful. You've probably heard it a few times already, but this describes Winter well. The stanzas per letter sound great. I apologise for the lack of ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Fade away
As FalingIntoAbyss said, there's a few mistakes. It made me stumble slightly reading it. "Sometimes I wish he's answer his phone." *He'd. He's would mean "he is/was". The ending was ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: The YWS Yearbook '07
Wow, I wish I had as much to write as everyone else here. I just thought I'd say something because I haven't been posting much. ^^;; Well... I'm kind of ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: An Alchemy Child: Chapter 1-3
Looks like a good story, I like it so far. Just a hint, try to space the chapters out. You'll want to post one chapter now and then. And a ...
Dec 10, 2007 -
Re: Friendly Foe Chapter 1
Sooo... here's the first chapter to a novel I'm starting. I'm really hoping for some critical reviews. By the way... the title will make more sense later on. ------ My ...
Dec 10, 2007 -
Re: Yes, No, Black, White.
Possibly. It depends on whether or not you mean today's tomorrow or the next day's tomorrow. Is the sky blue?
Nov 18, 2007 -
Re: Vampire Bite
Please, I'd like some good reviews. Heheh.. it was kind of random, so I don't expect it to be very good. I wanted to get opinions on it, though. Everything's ...
Oct 31, 2007 -
Re: A grandfathers tale, secrets of the long since buried.
Possibly the names? Aww, c'mon. You gotta tell us the names, Kam-kun. Soo... it looks like the grandfather has powers. Wow. I can't wait to see your next part. I ...
Oct 31, 2007 -
Re: Errmm... -raises hand- New.
'Kay. Heh... I'm open with Yahoo or MSN.... I really should add that to my info thingy... Ahhh, nice. I might try Tsubasa when I'm done with a series. Yeah... ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Errmm... -raises hand- New.
Hmmm... I'll keep an eye out for those books. Arigatou. ^^ Tsubasa... is it good? I've seen pictures of it before. Looks kinda cool. My mentor? Sure! Thanks. ^^ I ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: Errmm... -raises hand- New.
I really should organize my learning better. I kind of go to a site I'm using and browse the words, trying to memorize them. ^^;; Are you taking classes? I'm ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: Errmm... -raises hand- New.
Hai, it means vampire. Heheh... I was wondering if someone would pick up on it. Yay, I'll actually have someone to talk to here. >.> Most places where I try ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: Errmm... -raises hand- New.
Yeah, sure. ^^ Another nickname. Bonkers? Awesome. I'm a tad- well, more than a tad- crazy myself. I'm just a bit timid with new places at times... Well, I've been ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: Errmm... -raises hand- New.
Well... if someone wants to come talk to me, awesome. If not... well... -twiddles thumbs- Then I'll all alone. I figured I'd come say hi to everybody, though. So... hi!
Oct 29, 2007
