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Re: Nightwalkers of Seera
"Okay. I'm calm. I'm going." With that, Sev went towards the direction of the pond. Black watched him for a moment and stopped when he laid down on the rocks ...
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Re: Nightwalkers of Seera
Sev saw Keski, Lethero, and Black staring at each other. Black turned towards the alley where Sev was hiding. He nodded and Black knew that if Keski was to try ...
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Nightwalkers of Seera
"Heh heh. Stupid fools." Sev was talking to himself when he thought about those boys. He pushed the memory back into his mind. He sat down next to Blackwalker as ...
Jun 22, 2007 -
Re: Nightwalkers of Seera
Severance was sitting by the pond in the middle of the park. He enjoyed watching the fish swim back and forth. He was happy when he was human but even ...
Jun 21, 2007 -
Re: Nightwalkers of Seera
I'll join. Sounds interesting. Name: Severance or Sev for short. Nickname: Demon Gender: Male Species: Wearwolf Sub-Species: Human Pack: Streamline Pack Age: 24 Looks: Jet black fur with red tribal ...
Jun 21, 2007 -
Re: The Oil Mark [UPDATED]
I thought it was excellent. It does flow so it's easy to follow and read. I agree with everyone else. Just work on your word choice and it should be ...
Jun 17, 2007 -
Re: Teenage superheroes
Hey guys, I'm quitting this storybook. I've lost interest in it. My next comment is not meant to hurt the feelings of everyone that likes this but to me it ...
Jun 17, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars: The Fallen Knights
Marik and his Master were engaged in a frenzied conflict. Both knew that neither of them could win against each other but that didn't stop them. Marik swung low and ...
Jun 16, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars: The Fallen Knights
Marik grabbed his tunic off of his bunk and slipped it on covering the many scars and his muscles. He then took his double blade and clipped it onto his ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars: The Fallen Knights
Marik stumbled through the doorway into his room. He was injured in his shoulder by his Master during a sparing match. Crimson blood ran down his arm. Marik took off ...
Jun 13, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars: The Fallen Knights
Name: Marik "Katon" Veek Age: 17 Height and Weight: 6' 5" and 180 lbs. Looks: Elfish and fast looking. Dark black hair and crystal blue eyes. Personality: Firey, brash, unstable. ...
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Re: Blood Ties
I agree. We skip to the morning.
Jun 9, 2007 -
Re: Blood Ties
"I just want you to get the basics down. The hand signs, how much Chakra is to be used, that kind of stuff. However, I want you three to focus ...
Jun 9, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars storybook (?) DT
The whole point of this storybook is about Sith re-emergence. The remaining Sith are every where, demoralized. Yes the Exile helps to destroy them but he/she doesn't destroy them all. ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Star Wars storybook (?) DT
Revan and Malak never destroyed the Sith. After the war with Malak, Revan went to unite the Sith again as one and tried to establish an empire within the confines ...
Jun 8, 2007
