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Re: The Death Trilogy-Book 1-Chapter 1
I thought it was okay. It was not my favorite but, Dan, you know me. I can't keep my focus for than a few minutes before I trail off. It ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Dreamscape- Chapter 1
I have to agree with Jamie_rocks with the review. Those were exactly the same things I was going to say just not with Animorphs because I've nver read them. To ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Removed by Author
Nice job. I really enjoyed reading this story a lot. The thing I like most about the way you wrote this was how you described the personalities of a larger ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Beyond Avolon-Chapter 1
This story is ranking up with some of my favorites as of right now. Nice work. However, I did notice some things. You seemed to have a problem with your ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: The Brink
I like the flow the story gave. I found it easy to read and understand because of that. Although, I never understood why the character is so angry in the ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: The EagleFire Squadron
I agree with all of the reviewers. It was slows in some places but then it would pick up again which made me keep reading. To put it simply, my ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: A Summer's Day -for lack of a better title.
Amazing. Just amazing. Usually I'm not sentimental but this was possibly one of the best pieces I've read in a long time. I actually cried...a little :lol: That's pretty sad ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Dreamscape- Prolouge
I liked it. Good Story, plot, etc. However, I did not like the characters. When I was reading it, I didn't get a sense as to where or what they ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Warrior of the Wind Chapter #2
This is going to sound harsh. This one was the not the best. I thought it could it have used more plot overview. Who was the "dark figure?" That said, ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Book of Sorrow Chap. 1
Well done, Anthony. I do have to agree with nariel that the characters are a little bland and that they could use a little "spicing up" for the story. As ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Republic Commando
Caz sat in the LAAT seat next to other Commandos. They arrived a few days ago but stayed in orbit above Geonosis. His sniper rifle lay in his lap, primed ...
May 22, 2008 -
Re: The Joining
Riven lost track of the fight. It was like they just vanished. Although, he sensed a familiar prescence. Alexandria. He arrived at the place he sensed her. He immediatley picked ...
May 12, 2008 -
Re: The Joining
Riven sensed a commotion nearby. He had been walking around for a while now and had nearly collected his bearings when his right arm started to pulse. That usually meant ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: The Joining
Riven sat upright in his bed. Sweat beaded on his forehead. He had a nightmare. The "changing" was becoming more and more taxing on his body. Mentally and physically. Due ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: The Joining
I'd like to join. It sounds pretty cool. Just one question. Would you mind if I don't post everyday, because I have final exams and all that "good stuff" coming ...
May 7, 2008
