Kyuubi

Wow, that was possibly the longest piece I've read in a long time. Anyway, I have to say that there are some people who can write a better vampire love ...

I agree completely with Mysty. The description you had going was great but as soon as you carried it to the dialogue...POOF!!! It was gone. I think that hurt the ...

I'm in the same position as Seana and Ace on this one. It seems as though you're rushing into the story with very little information for the reader gain. There ...

I'm slightly confused by the character. Not that they're at a bad start for the story but you don't go into much detail about their personalities. For example, this girl, ...

Well..hopefully some people will join.

Oh my! I love this game...although, the cannibals kinda freak me out...Anyway, I'm so in if it's okay.

Battle School. Every kids dream in the world of Tethe. From an early age, kids are brought to the school to hone their skills. The school is literally a massive ...

"Hmmm..this could be a chance for revenge. Not that I'm petty, but, I don't like to lose," I said to myself. "M'lord?" Kaden wondered. "Nothing, you have no need to ...

After watching Serenade phase out of the throne room, I took my seat in the marble throne and sighed. being here for the first time in centuries was almost unnerving ...

Orion I remember when I found this band. Oh, how I do. It was mid summer, or what the human equivalent to a summer in m land is, and I ...

Yo yo! I got the main bad dude! Name: Orion (Last name unknown) Age: 29 in Human, unknown in Dream Gender: Male Appearance: Tall, muscular, with an average weight, black ...

I agree with Syte on this. I'm a DragonBall fan but this movie is...hmmm....what's the word?

Hola! This is the first crit I've done in about a month, so forgive me if it's a little vague. So, onto the writing! Oh and before I forget, I'm ...

Okay, I might drop out. I don't know yet. This story isn't even like Naruto at all. It's all over the place. I'm gone for four days and already there ...

Will's parents soon left too go home and make funeral preparations. Wow, shows how much they care, Will thought. It had been a while since he tried too walk. He ...