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Re: Radical Kills [Chapter two: 'One Down']
Thanks for the review! Really helpful! I'll definitely take those things into account as I continue posting chapters. :)
Aug 9, 2015 -
Re: Radical Kills [Chapter one: 'Deliberation']
Sure, I'll do that! And no, I don't mind at all--take whatever you like!
Aug 9, 2015 -
Re: Radical Kills [Chapter one: 'Deliberation']
Thanks for the comment! And yes, I've already finished the book (for the most part--haven't yet finished editing). Hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapters! :)
Aug 9, 2015 -
Re: The Meddler - Chapter 1
Very nice job! I enjoyed reading it. May I offer a suggestion? I think that sometimes your sentences are too short. They don't give the reader much to go by, ...
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Nine
I love how you incorporate the cultural aspect, in a way that it isn't overpowering but just enough to be effective. Overall, very well written! Great job!
Aug 7, 2015 -
Re: Radical Kills [Chapter one: 'Deliberation']
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. LOL--I didn't even notice that misspelling. Thanks for that too :p
Aug 7, 2015