KyleTheGreat13

This is really interesting! You caught my attention quickly and I'm excited for future installments! The only critique I have to offer is that while most of it is spot-on, ...

This got my attention for sure! I'm dying to know more about Paradise, and the sudden change in perspective pulled me in even further. I'll be watching for more of ...

Nice. I like how straightforward and to the point this is! I found it interesting that you dropped the rhyme scheme in the final stanza - whether it was intended ...

That was sassy! Consider me a fan. The line breaks and impressive flow really helped with the mental imagery! The only thing that could be improved would be for the ...

I love this! I think we've all been there at one point or another in life, and you really knocked it out of the park! You developed the message very ...

I like it! This poem really puts a mental image of the situation into my mind, and you put it simply, making it very easy to relate to. I can ...

The oldest memories of sprouting from earth, Finding a path and finding a worth, Are none without what a plant longs to be, Nothing without the great oak tree. With ...