KyleTheGreat13

These are lyrics to a song I wrote. I play this song in my band, Shock 12. Feel free to Facebook us! (Sorry for advertising) :D It was a beautiful ...

This is awesome! You found a message that proves so meaningful for so many people. That is what great writing does! Your descriptions are absolutely great, and you used the ...

Tragic! This is really good. I love the entire concept of the balloons in there. I think you really struck gold with all of the vivid imagery and anecdotes. Also ...

Really good! Just a flat out good idea, and an even better delivery. It's refreshing to see someone providing some good commentary on topics that America has deemed "controversial". The ...

Snap crackle POP! That was some saucy stuff right there, bro. I liked this a lot. I think we've all been in this situation before, making it easily relatable. I ...

Deep stuff! If I interpreted the meaning correctly, I agree that sometimes change can be overwhelming in every way. I really like your work here, because I think it's something ...

This is awesome! If Socrates wrote poetry, he'd have written something like this. Nothing like questioning everything :) Keep it up!

Some of the best music ever written!

That's dope! I love how it switches between different events and thoughts - kind of reminded me of a few parts in Brave New World by Aldous Huxley. Also, great ...

Another project for school. I think the message may have been a tad underdeveloped, but there are some parts I like. Feel free to be harsh! :D In common days ...

I like this! Although I'll admit I don't entirely understand the message, this poem still proves to be quite thought-provoking. I feel a lot of reversal going on, providing a ...

Overall, this is very well-written. A few thoughts: The first paragraph could be made a lot stronger with some better word choice to describe John. I love that he was ...

I'm a fan! The first paragraph as a whole was a tad shaky, but the rest was real solid. Cordvac seems like an interesting character, and I'd love to know ...

Very good! If you hadn't said you were new at this topic, I would have easily thought otherwise. It flows very well, which may be one of the best aspects ...

In school this year, we were asked to write about something we believe in. This I Believe: Life is a cataclysmic maelstrom of delirium, but at the same time, a ...