KyleRumbold

Thank you very much. Yes, I will work on my ending, I will keep that in mind. About the girl, these are kind of like snippets so I thought I ...

Thank you. I do know the end was a bit abrupt, not very good at endings, but I think I could work on them. I will be writings like a ...

Hi! I am Kyle, and I am not here to review your poem, cause I know nothing at all about poetry. Yes, your poem is silly, but I like it. ...