Kylan

Prolgue = prologue. If you want to be taken seriously, at least spell your titles correctly. -Kylan

What time period is this in? Technically, it's in the future. Like, ten or twenty years from now. But I'm trying to make the time period as ambiguous as possible ...

Oliver Twist . I tried to read it twice, but decided on both occasions that I was wasting my time on prosaic crap. -Kylan

To all confused by Ethan and Eli >> I was trying to show the "corruption" of the world and some of the reasons the cult led by Father Brian was ...

From the Corner of his Eye is phenomenal. Possibly ranking in my top ten favorite books of all time list. Read it. -Kylan

Hanging Out in the Deep South his legs dangled like hollow metal wind-chime tubes and when the wind threw fists at him covered by whisper-padded boxing gloves, his body swung ...

Yay! I'm glad everyone is enjoying this! Jared and Clo >> You both mentioned the whole funhouse mirror/Jew bit. I was trying to elaborate on a circus funhouse mirror - ...

A Descent into Greeting Card Smiles and Fortune Cookie Sympathies All of us are merely Victorian women sipping tea around dining room sideboards (that are like autopsy tables where Conversation's ...

Hello all! I just posted the remaining portion of Fingerpaint in the original thread entry under [part 2 of 2]. I hope you enjoy! Also, Conrad >> Actually, it's not ...

I appreciate everyone's critiques! I'm glad you all are enjoying this. It was/is my plan for this to be one part in a three part story, composed of short vignettes ...

ACT I SCENE 2 OPEN on a room with five sewing machines operated by five boys, with ages ranging from ten to twelve. Their names are EFRAIN, VINCENT, MANUEL, RICO, ...

“You Talkin' to Me?”: De Niro's Interrogative Fidelity and Subversion of Masculine Norms Her eyelashes are helicopter blades snapped off of Black Hawk assault choppers like foot bone-sized pieces

spaced_out >> Perhaps you would understand the story better, my friend, if you read parts 1-4. Whether you were well-meaning or not in your critique, groundless advice is not appreciated. ...

Thank you very much for your critiques. As always, they give me a new perspective on what I write, so I can examine my mistakes and flaws more carefully. So, ...

Okay, I agree with the general verdict here. I kind of lapse into 'over-writing' whenever I don't feel passionate about what I'm writing and/or if I haven't planned a scene ...