Kylan

Connie - I enjoyed this! A very nice addition to this piece. There were a couple lines of dialogue I saw that were pure gold and, as Jiggity said, your ...

Nixon - I loved this. Fantastic rhythm, fantastic descriptions. Subtle and abstract, yet laden with meaning at the same time, a delicate and easily upset sort of promised land. You ...

Jiggity - Very nice. Very nice, indeed. I'm really looking forward to more of this, though in smaller portions. I specifically enjoyed The Whistler, which I recall being in the ...

Conrad - Interesting, as always. You're definately contructing a different kind of character. Very unique. I can't wait to see all the dimensions add to him. But I have to ...

Jiggity - Wow. This was beautiful in its emotions and subtleties. I don't know why you hate it so much. It's really a pretty good piece of work and I'm ...

Jiggity - A thorough, solid introduction. Not as captivating or interesting a topic as Stars , but, as always, you managed to take a cliched scene and make it your ...

Conrad - Again, you've given us a very solid chapter. Nothing much I could pick out, because, as Jiggity says, all Creep really does is fall to his knees and ...

Conrad - This was a good chapter. You've enlightened us a little more in regards to Creep's psyche and mentality. Now we see that his psychological complexes are more twisted ...

Conrad - Very nice. Definately a chapter with some awesome dialogue and characterization. Concetta is suberbly written. [when secondary characters attack!] However, because Concetta is such a strong f

Conrad - Once again, I am here in the wreckage of what five very experienced individuals have left smoking ^_^. I like what's been written. And I think it was ...

Conrad - I'm not going to be giving a line by line critique or even much of a stylistic critique because you've had a lot of well-thought out and well-placed ...

Jared - Ooooh. This is intense. I really enjoyed how you set things up. Very effecient and lean and mean. As always, a wonderful job. [the devil's gone down to ...

I think that you're right to some degree. A lot of the art these days is meaningless drivel. But some of it is stimulating and thought provoking. For instance, I ...

Jared - Well, there isn't much left to critique after Jig and Squall. They hardly left me anything. But what they did address and tear apart is completely justified. Listen ...

Clo - Simply unbelievable. This poem effortlessly glides over the eyes and the tongue and has a killer closing line. The concept is wonderful, the style is simple and tasteful, ...