Kylan

Nate - Somehow, anyone can post in the subforums of any group, whether they have membership or not. A new puzzle for you... -Kylan

Well, I think that only subforums are bugged. When you try and access any subforum you get what writersdomain copied above. Thanks for all your hard work Nate! -Kylan

Thank you both for your positive critiques. I'm glad you liked it. "Marble... Characters see no evil hear no evil speak no evil" It was supposed to be charters . ...

Thanks, smorg

The Magician Good work. -Kylan

These are some interesting lyrics. I can see the ambiguity between the magician and a lying friend. It's clever and unique. However, your meter seems totally convoluted. I can see ...

The Latin phrase sub rosa means "under the rose" and is used in English to connote secrecy or confidentiality. The poem was a statement of the stifling of free speech. ...

That was good. Unfortunately, the repition did nothing for me. In fact, it weighed down the poem like a fruitcake with too many dried apples :wink: . If you want ...

Beneath the rose nothing is repeated. Mouths and eyes and ears are stitched shut surgically and what has been mounted on the doorway never wilts, never droops; needles, like diamonds, ...

Well, it's happened. My novel, Honor, has reached it's 50,000 word mark! After several months of writing, I can now say I'm penning a novel . I've never been a ...

Okay. You have now completely delved into the realm of historical fiction. And frankly, the piece hit me as underesearched and slightly cliche. You've got to understand that the fat ...

That was pretty good. I felt myself immediatly drawn into your story. Your dialogue was good, your characterization was good, and you just managed to pull off your backstory; a ...

[Booker Lee] 1. Booker doesn't have time for religion. 2. Not in particular... 3. At the moment, nowhere. Booker's been skipping from hotel rooms to jail cells for a majority ...

Should we have recieved our contracts yet? -Kylan

Very entertaining. Your imagery is superb; something that seems to be missing in a lot of pieces here on YWS. A lesser writer may not have been able to pull ...