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Re: Cal's Colorful Contest: Hallucinogenic (Part 2)
I haven't done any formal editing with this, so it may seem a little rough. That's okay. I want you guys to help me edit this. I'm using it for ...
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: Honor
Thanks smorg, I'm glad you liked it. Actually, I live on the other side of the country and I've never set foot in New York, let alone a subway. Do ...
Jan 14, 2008 -
Re: Attention: Inactive Usergroups Will Be Deleted
Can we recreate them later? -Kylan
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Critique the Person Above You!
Caffe sopeso By the way, Acoustic, that was cheap. It kind of defeats the purpose of this thread to stick in something of mine you've critiqued before I posted. You ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: caffè sospeso
You know, I liked this too. I can't necessarily see this being published or winning you hoards of adoring fans, but it's got a simple, attractive quality to it. I ...
Jan 12, 2008 -
Re: A Lesson in Semantics
The shining characteristic of all of your writing is your strong, clipped, omnipresent voice. You easily describe emotions and personality with each sentence which makes your characters vivid and uniq
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: A Lesson in Semantics
The shining characteristic of all of your writing is your strong, clipped, omnipresent voice. You easily describe emotions and personality with each sentence which makes your characters vivid and uniq
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Veiled Soul
Your style is lofty, to say the least. You can effortlessly describe emotions and situations and be satisfying at the same time, but you could easily lose readership with your ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Critique the Person Above You!
Virulence #1 Keep up the good work. -Kylan
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Virulence #1
The premise of this piece reminded me strongly of I Am Legend, which isn't a good thing. Takes place in the near future, humanity is practically wiped out, and monsters ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Cal's Colorful Contest: Hallucinogenic (Part 1)
“Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality.” - Jules de Gaultier Ivan locked the door. Crossing the apartment room, he fingered the plastic bag in his coat ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: A little improv...
(PS: Bear with me because I'm not quite sure what you're asking for ^_^). Communism is a perfect form of govenment for a society or populace that feels that complete ...
Jan 7, 2008 -
Re: Behold, 'tis Kaistofel
You love fantasy, you're real name is Garth, and your favorite food is Italian. Good to have you. May your YWS career be long and prolific, Garth. -Kylan
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: Thoughts on 'Why?'
This seems more like a blog post than a non-fiction piece. :wink: Anyways, I know how you feel. But I think I know why I write. I write because creating ...
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: Orchard
These are a few pictures I took up at an orchard near where I live. Tell me how you like them. -Kylan
Jan 4, 2008
