Kylan

Did you know there are fifteen users with some form of "wolf" in their username. Did you further know there are eight members with wolf-themed avatars? We're being overrun. -Kylan

This was good. I was immediately absorbed into your dialogue and description, which were both well-structured and vibrant. But the plot itself - and the entire storyline for that matter ...

667! Eep. One digit away from 666! I must be devil's spawn. -Kylan

Ah. I have competition for dear Cal's contest. May the best story win! (Also, good luck on your plays, both writing them and acting them.) -Kylan

I don't think they're going to kill you for leaving out a thousand words or so. To my understanding, word count isn't even patrolled that heavily. So, just to make ...

I'll submit something. I'm an instructor, after all, so I might as well earn my purple font... -Kylan

Okay. This started out good, but then steadily went downhill. The main problem you have here, my friend, is your pacing. Or in this case, the lack of. Nearly every ...

8/10 I like that idea. If the cover art was good, I'd read it. :wink: Synopsis (short story): After being particularly cruel to the class outcast - the one with ...

The thing that confused me about Ivan's death was that when he was still hallucinating, I thought that Todd shot him in the stomach. I don't know a whole lot ...

This is definately intriguing. Your prose is very tight and to the point. Good qualities. I found myself wanting more. However, this seems like a strange beginning unless it's meant ...

I like it. You are an extremely talented writer. Your characters are stoic, but somehow retain the personality you've dealt out to them and your settings are pristine. However, I ...

Experiment. Eat it, and if you don't die within a day or two, it's okay still. ...Because people with scientific minds live long and healthy lives. :wink: -Kylan

This is great! -Kylan

So I'm pretty sure I'll be able to finish this baby off by the end of February. I just spent a week writing a short story and it's back to ...

Thanks for your guys' help with this. And I'm glad you all enjoyed it ^_^. Part 2 of 2 is out. See if you like it. -Kylan