Kylan

Name for group & novel = Ataxia -or- Operation Ataxia Dictionary definition: Ataxia: (n) Loss of the ability to coordinate muscular movement. Loss of coordiation could relate to the loss ...

“Your turn.” I handed the controller reluctantly to my idle friend. He was still grinning from my mediocre game. “What! You got something to say,” I retorted . He just ...

“Your turn.” I handed the controller reluctantly to my idle friend. He was still grinning from my mediocre game. “What! You got something to say,” I retorted . He just ...

A poem, perchance? Suspensional Combustion Pleas and thank you! -Kylan

You treat me like crap – neck jutting out, jackknifing forward with all the subtly of a pair of latex hands belonging to a colonoscopy surgeon – Just shut up ...

This first scene is probably one of my favorite scenes.

Incredible, Sam dear. I wish there was more. I wish there were pages and pages and pages more of these delicious words. Teach me. Teach me everything you know. Please? ...

Okay, everybody. This is my first attempt at scriptwriting. Moreover, it's my first attempt at screenplay . Inspired by Cal's new contest, structured in reference to Brad's recently posted screenplay,

Well, it really doesn't matter what forum you post this in. A strong, action-oriented beginning is the best way to start any literary piece, regardless of genre. You want to ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you have a long and happy career in the forums here. Secondly, let me give you a word of advice. Never post ...

Yesssss! More information! -Kylan

Crit of Chapter One only: As usual, my dear, a delicious read. I adore your dialogue. It flows, it moves, it's funny, it's informative, and what's more it left me ...

Day 1; 8:37 AM Booker : As if a pair of rose colored glasses had been slipped over his eyes, the world was blood-stained. Crimson, pumping through veins – unseen, ...

Problems with the plot: 1.) Hektagirl is right. For some reason, the whole affair sounds abysmally cliche. 2.) Whatever you do, do not use 'Shadow Clan'. 3.) A 'kept thief'? ...

What are we going to do once we reach the coffee shop? I was planning on having Booker go beserk and start waving his gun around the place. But... that ...