Kylan

The last stanza is brilliant. I wanna frame it. I wanna steal it. Anyway, this is great. Lots of extremely powerful imagery. The only problem I have with it is ...

This is actually a great poem. It's got a nice cadence to it for a freeform piece. If you write one of these every day, you could probably publish an ...

I'm a bit late, but I think I'll manage. Anyway, here's my thread. I'm going to try some mixed styles this month, maybe even throw in a few rhyming pieces. ...

I'm with Kitty. -Kylan

This is extremely sad and radiates some obvious emotion. You have my greatest sympathies. However, as a piece of literature, this suffers. A diary is a diary; rarely entertaining enough ...

This would be tons of fun. And, if not nation/worldwide, it could at least be a site-wide activity. We should get a forum up ASAP. -Kylan

Patience drips like sweat from his pores (coagulating rivers bridging his nose); a shark whose victims bleed fist-sized cue balls. Cigarette smoke haunts the graveyard with spherical tombstones. And t

Benjamin Ten minutes. Carrying the wine glass stem between his fingers like a cigarette, Benjamin took a deep breath of the urban evening air as he climbed the staircase leading ...

Entry Critique: I've always liked the word carnage. :wink: Anyway, as a piece of flash fiction, this was good. It has a rolling, poetic format to it that not many ...

Entry Critique: I enjoyed this piece. It has some good imagery, beautful expressions, and solid syntax. On the whole, nice job. I only have a few problems here. First off, ...

Charlotte Ten minutes. Charlotte stared at the gun in her hand, wondering how much time had elapsed since the radio bulletin. Not long, she thought. Ten minutes was eternity. Ten ...

For anyone who cares, I just finished this baby! Three cheers for me! -Kylan

FINISHED!!!!! -Kylan

Crit for entering the "On Fire" contest: Despite, it's bluntness and rhyming scheme, I really liked this piece. You know poetry's good when the last line sends something electric down ...

Yeah, Dramatica's pretty spendy. Scratch that. Outrageously spendy. Trust me, good old pencil and paper will beat $200 software any day of the week. But if you're bent and determined, ...