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Re: This Visious Circle
I'm sorry, but I can't critique this until 'vicious' is spelled right in your title. -Kylan
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Kylan's NaPoWriMo Thread
April 12 Symphony en masse Intermingling on the sidewalk – forming instantaneous relationships that whisper of clandestine liaisons – in an ocean of black accented by well-tied corporate nooses, t
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Re: "The paper burns..."
Unfortunately, I couldn't access your link from the chatroom, so I'm just going to assume that your most recent poem is the one you wanted me to review. Anyway, you ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: A Ferromagnetic Soliloquy
Thank you both for your comments. Medusa >> Actually, this piece has nothing to do with the superhero. I was trying to conjure up images of a big, awkward, 'heartless' ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: A Ferromagnetic Soliloquy
A/N: Old! Turn back! I am Iron Man. With fingers like sheet-metal silos, I grope for your radiance, which only shatters around me like prismatic fireflies. Uncoordinated and awkward. You ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Kylan's NaPoWriMo Thread
April 11 A Ferromagnetic Soliloquy I am Iron Man. With fingers like sheet-metal silos, I grope for your radiance, which only shatters around me like prismatic fireflies. Uncoordinated and awkward. ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: I'm Hungry...
Hey there Jabber! You may or may not have noticed, but a rewrite of Honor #1 is up. Maybe for the sake of old times, you could take a look ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: Of Woodpushers and Sacred Hearts
This was written for NaPoWriMo, and I rather liked it. So I'm posting it here for all the world to see. Tell me how you like it. *** Creased Japanese ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Kylan's NaPoWriMo Thread
April 10 Of Woodpushers and Sacred Hearts Creased Japanese cherry blossoms fall at Saint Peter's feet like ivory tear drops, pirouetting from the coarse and wiry hair of an arbor ...
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Re: The Book Thief
Notice my avatar. The Book Thief is pure art. -Kylan
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Newbie! Newbilicious.
One of the sisters of Imp. A pleasure to meet you. And, even better, we have something in common. Reliant K. I actually saw them in concert along with Switchfoot ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Honor #1 [rewrite]
So. I've decided to rewrite the first chapter of my novel (which has been completed, for those of you who aren't aware -- clocking in at 80,000 words) due to ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Pep For Poets
Hey there, Matt I'm participating in the NaPoWriMo and I was wondering if you could take a look at my NaPo thread You don't have to give very in depth ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Kylan's NaPoWriMo Thread
April 9 The closing scene of the trimester “How the hell did I get a B?” he spat, chewing furiously on blistering curses and charbroiled anger. His jaws were swollen ...
Apr 9, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Random Poems!
your oldest friends of words join beyond this moment, all your lovers of death cry inside the meaning, some of the waves above you reach beside the river, your oldest ...
Apr 9, 2008
