Kylan

Hey there CK! I don't believe I've ever critted anything of yours. Anyway, as someone else said, this would probably be best rewritten as lyrics. You've got this partial rhyming ...

This looks brilliant. My kind of storybook. Name: Booker Lee Age: 30 Occupation/Job: Soldier (2nd Lieutenant) Personality: Hard, commanding, dark, and brooding Appearance: Short black hair, blue eyes

Not many more of these left, Jabster :wink: Anyway, if there's anything I could do for you, just give me a shout. -Kylan

Rated R for a graphic pregnancy scene Okay. So this isn't all of #4. But I felt something about Eva's c-section/labor was false, so I decided to take it a ...

Sammich! I have a historical piece for you. Maybe you'd like to take a peek? Thanks, -Kylan

April 14 Death Strip Civil blood is spattered against this curtain in multi-colored splotches that seethe indignation and hate which is painted in mushroom clouds across the municipal sky-line. Iron ...

Cal's Something Old Contest (0.46 [Kiss]) This is a scene from the Triangle Shirtwaist Factory Fire which can be read about here As I looked up I saw a love ...

Hey there Marie! Welcome to YWS. You have some good stuff here. I especially enjoyed the imagery and the use of symbolism to explain something bigger and more consequential than ...

So here's the deal. We all have unfinished stories on our hard drives or buried deep in the crumpled pages composition notebooks that we know that we'll never finish. Either ...

Thank you all for your comments! Roughly three weeks ago, I submitted this piece to Shimmer Zine for publication. However, they decided to pass it up and gave me these ...

50,000 words is the acknowledged minimum count for a novel. So you're there. My longest novel - Honor - is slightly over 80,000 words. As soon as I finished editing, ...

April 13 Osculating The curvature of space-time is nothing compared to the slipstream of her body where desire is distilled and weeps across porcelain skin.

Like Imp said, YWS may not be flashy, but it serves it's purpose well. Humble, maybe, but all-inlcusive. Take a look at our sister site, TW. We seem to eons ...

Another for old time's sake, perhaps? -Kylan

This is a rewrite of the flashback scene in my novel, which can be found in Honor #3. If you're interested, tell me whether you prefered this rewrite over the ...