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Re: Marvel
Was my last post too lengthy? Too irrevelant? I kind of just...wrote. Did anyone read it, or was it skipped over? I dunno. That's the most I've ever written for ...
May 9, 2008 -
Re: The Archetypal Amtrack
Thank you very much for taking a look at this Cassandra. I glad you enjoyed it to some extent. Also, remember to put capital letters where they are required I ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: The Archetypal Amtrack
Names are carved into brick walls (stained with the swollen black blood of trains) like graphite voices from wooden slats and steel rails, oxidized with loose feet and creased carpet ...
May 8, 2008 -
Re: Marvel
I hope it's okay if I start this thing off. It won't matter too much seeing as I'm the only villain as of yet. And sorry for the massive post, ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
Kind of dry. Maybe a story relating to geneology. Perhaps the MC is in search of his or her heritage. Crossing the Rubicon -Kylan
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Marvel
Real Name: Jack Kane Aka: The Joker Age: 38 (?) Hero, Villain or Civilian: Villain Power(s): Extremely adept at engineering, genetics, and chemistry. Uses weapons that have some kind of ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Instructor's Critque Central
Hello all! I am here on behalf of the instructors in lieu of the On Fire contest. A la Caligula's Launderette, I will be posting critques to be had and ...
May 5, 2008 -
Re: Crossing the Rubicon
Here's a full-length play that my friend and I are writing. We've decided to write parallel to each other, meaning we write each scene simultaneously and then pick the parts ...
May 3, 2008 -
Re: How did everyone get on?
I did roughly half of the prescribed number. There just came a point where writing a poem just drained me creatively. It also interfered with my novel editing/prose writing. I ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: The Stranger She Once Knew
Hey there XxxDo! You have a good start here. you managed not to give too much information away, and simultaneously kept me interested. Kudos. One of my only complaints is ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: Execution: Executed
Hey there, Tag! 1.) Does it catch your attention? To an extent. There's a possibility that I would have enjoyed this more, had the writing been more clear and succinct. ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: Honor #4.5 [rewrite]
For the first portion of this chapter, refer to this link . Roaring, Booker ripped his hand away from the second officer and sank his elbow into the gut of ...
May 1, 2008 -
Re: What bands/artists are your favorite?
AFI Alesana Arctic Monkeys Big Bad Voodoo Daddy Fall Out Boy Flogging Molly Foo Fighters Guns N' Roses Jack Johnson Maroon 5 Panic! at the Disco Paramore Red Hot Chili ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Honor #4.0 [rewrite]
Booker sat in the Village Garden parking lot, listening to the engine tick like raindrops on a tin roof. Staring forward – staring at nothing, staring at everything – he ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: Critique the Person Above You!
PS: I could really use some help with my novel rewrites. -Kylan
Apr 23, 2008
