Kylan

Okay, I agree with the general verdict here. I kind of lapse into 'over-writing' whenever I don't feel passionate about what I'm writing and/or if I haven't planned a scene ...

To the music of "Happy Birthday to You" and sung with a riduclously pompous French accent. Bonne Fete A Toi Bonne Fete A Toi Bonne Fete A Naaa-ate Bonne Fete ...

Thank you for your input, Grif. I'll take your comments into consideration. However, I feel like I need to justify myself somewhat. First of all, I'm curious as to whether ...

There is incredible poetry in the way the arms of a corpse are sometimes lifted towards the sky, as if silent hallelujahs have been infused into its fingers – carried ...

So I'm getting the impression that Alex somehow stopped the tornado by screaming? If this is true, it could be expanded on. Anyway, this is an interesting start. You are ...

I felt that Harrison Ford's acting was a little stiff for the first half of the movie, that some of the action sequences were too unrealistic (even for an Indiana ...

The fantasy is coming... :wink: Anyway, thank you all for your critiques and praise. Part two is up and expect #3 (part 1) tomorrow maybe. -Kylan

Though practically all of the bases have been covered, I thought I'd put in my two cents. I think I see, Matt, where your Mom is coming from. Even though ...

Another one. For God's sake, she had ruined another one. Mike was going to have a coronary once he heard that she had managed to chase away another story, make ...

I come. :wink: Anyway. A brilliant installment. Faulkener or not, your writing style is beautiful. Very down to earth and true to life. I enjoyed the symbolism of the bleached ...

Seville, Spain Charlotte Rush slapped the tape recorder on the café table and sat back, letting her eyes trace the geography of the clouds – tattered rags of cotton – ...

Couldn't resist. Anything with an ominous bible quote at the beginning screams to be read. This was very good, Jared. JFW mentioned that this wasn't your usual bill of fare ...

I'm not sure if this is 'bug-worthy', but since roughly 3:00 pm pacific time the font in all posts has been different and difficult to decipher using IE 7. (This ...

5/10 Gives me a headache. -Kylan

Most likely some fantasy themed revolution story. I'm thinking the main characters are a clan of disillusioned Robin Hood-esque characters who are fed up with the tyranical government and decide ...