Kylan

All the acid trips in the world couldn't compare to the monkish throat music rising from his diaphragm like vibrations dancing high wire Charlestons between tin can phones. He said, ...

I enjoyed this. As Faith said, it definately has a certain elegance. A certain appeal to it. Very pretty words defining a pleasent enough topic I suppose. Although, as Jared ...

Ooh. Very nice. You have me hooked, my friend! I really enjoyed this. It was very Jared-esque. Simple in its delivery, but powerful nonetheless. Tight, taut, multi-layered, true to life. ...

Here's Nikola again! *** Outside of Sarajevo, Bosnia The air was pregnant with water. As Nikola ran through the field – each step stealing acetic tears from his eyes that ...

Thank you very much for your critiques. As always, they give me a new perspective on what I write, so I can examine my mistakes and flaws more carefully. So, ...

Out of the four point of views I've written from, I've found Paul (and this chapter) to be the most fun by far. *** San Diego, California Eight Years Earlier ...

People trying to disprove/prove flaws in evolutionary theory (in favor of, one can only assume, creationism or some such nonsense) make me laugh. Look here, Evolution is, for all intents ...

Incidently - and this may seem a minor thing - but you'd do well not to use the phrase 'Darwinism' (or 'Darwinist') in a debate; it reveals your bias, and ...

Okay, makes sense. How a nerve comes to be sensitive to light, hardly concerns us more than how life itself originated However, what does he mean by this? It sounds ...

1) The eye quote is what's known as a 'quote mine'. It was taken out of its context to make it appear as though Darwin is saying something that he ...

Its a career choice, for the most part, isn't it? Like a lawyer, or a doctor, or a felon. So wouldn't that make them part of the work force, legal ...

You've mentioned some of Darwinism's major flaws. However, nothing is without imperfections or gaps. All sciences have flaws and inconsistencies (for the most part), and so do all religions. Therefore

*CRITIQUE PRIZE* Hey there J! You have a nice piece here. As you said, it's very subtle, and the undertones - or the overtones, for that matter - are difficult ...

Adam turned around and wiped his hands on his shirt and listened as distant screams and the isolated sound of grating metal funneled their way into the cell from other ...

Ooh. By far, the best chapter yet. I enjoyed this very much. The dialogue is probably what made it for me. Very real, very funny, very idiosyncratic. Reading all these ...