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Re: A Collection of Doodles
Recently, I've been writing a lot of poetry that I would define as the equivalent of a doodle or a sketch in the art world. Not much of it makes ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: The Ouija Board
Hey there Jared! Finally getting to this. Things have cooled down for the next few days and I decided to pay you a visit. I was not disappointed. The story ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal: Now On Amazon!
Sales doing any better now? -Kylan
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: The Elbe is Filled With Prayers
- and the basement smelled of old cigarette smoke and chipped paint. It smelled like sweat and urine – infecting the air like musky perfume – and the walls seemed ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Jennafina Conquers Utah
what does Utah have that YWS don't ? Doesn't? *grammar moment* Anyway, have fun there Jen. Any particular reason for leaving, or do you just have the urge to take ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 5)
spaced_out >> Perhaps you would understand the story better, my friend, if you read parts 1-4. Whether you were well-meaning or not in your critique, groundless advice is not appreciated. ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 5)
If you're six foot tall and east coast bred some lonely night we can get together and I'm gonna tie your wrists with leather and drill a tiny hole into ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 3 and 4)
And she's got red lipstick and a bright pair of shoes and she's got knee high socks, what to cover a bruise -Andrew Bird, "Fake Palindromes" Part 3; [028. Face] ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: After the Angel: Eve's Story
Although your concept is unique, I found this to be lacking many of the elements essential for good poetry. What you've done here is express an old story again in ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: June's Instructor of the Month: JFW1415
Three cheers! -Kylan
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Rate The Custom Title Above You
5/10 Where in the west? -Kylan
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
7/10 -Kylan
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Swapping Your Blood with Formaldehyde (Part 1 and 2)
Whiskey-plied voices cried fratricide! don't you know that you could've died (you should've died) -Andrew Bird, "Fake Palindromes" 1929; Part 1; [038. Knot] Outside, past the stained-glass windows tha
Jun 12, 2008 -
Re: Your Ultimate Festival Line-up
Alesana Andrew Bird Arctic Monkeys Big Bad Voodoo Daddy Disturbed Flogging Molly Jason Mraz Jet The Killers Maroon 5 Panic! at the Disco Paramore Rise Against Serj Tankian System of ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: God Still Loves You (4)
As has been said before me, this was a very powerful scene. Very full and very indicative of your style. I enjoyed it, as always. However, I think out of ...
Jun 9, 2008
