Kylan

I appreciate everyone's critiques! I'm glad you all are enjoying this. It was/is my plan for this to be one part in a three part story, composed of short vignettes ...

Well... I think it involved a kid my age, a golden handgun, and shadowy forests. I must've been six, so I don't recall the particulars. :wink: -Kylan

Hello there! Your story looked lonely so I decided to keep it company for a while. Honestly, my friend, you lost me. And not due to of an over-use of ...

Orpheus' lute was strung with poets' sinews, Whose golden touch could soften steel and stones, Make tigers tame and huge leviathans Forsake unsounded deeps to dance on sands. - The ...

It was an incredible movie. It transends the superhero movie genre and borders on a gritty, tale-for-the-ages. Heath Ledger was superb. The script was nearly flawless. And the end had ...

Hey there Angel! I thought I'd stop by and repay you for all of your wonderful critiques. I picked a piece out of your profile that was more recent and ...

ACT I SCENE 2 OPEN on a room with five sewing machines operated by five boys, with ages ranging from ten to twelve. Their names are EFRAIN, VINCENT, MANUEL, RICO, ...

Really, I'm in Suzanne's boat right now. I think that this is probably one of the worst presidential line-ups we've ever had. Obama has some real potential. He's a good ...

And I'm with Demeter and Gryph. By far, this was the most suspenseful addition. Superb. You seem to have (more or less) mastered the art of writing a trill oriented ...

"The Jazz Machine," by Richard Matheson. It's more of a story-poem than anything else. You can't find it on the internet to my knowledge, so the only place to read ...

Benedict -Kylan

“You Talkin' to Me?”: De Niro's Interrogative Fidelity and Subversion of Masculine Norms Her eyelashes are helicopter blades snapped off of Black Hawk assault choppers like foot bone-sized pieces

ACT I SCENE 1 OPEN on an old man, CARLOS, standing center stage with his hands in the pockets of his overcoat. The stage is naked and dark save for ...

I really enjoyed this, Suz! As usual, you've given us a brilliant metaphor to string an idea together and make us think of a common idea or theme from a ...

Wonderful. A very satisfying conclusion. Some things I liked about the chapter : -- The washing/drying machine metaphor -- The note at the end. Very unexpected. -- How you managed ...