Kylan

When the morning nurse came in to check on Charlie, she found him wearing his pillow case over his head so that he looked like a Ku Klux Klan wizard ...

-September 15th- The doctor sat beside his bed and smiled at Charlie. His smile was tight and thin and his hands shook slightly. Charlie knew that this man knew more ...

1. lying in this sand we are smudged out cigarettes in ash trays sunbathing in the heat of Allah's frown and swatting flies like big gorillas hanging from the Empire ...

Conrad - Unfortunately, I have to echo Jiggity's opening paragraph. You really didn't do much with this. I had really high expectations for part two, but instead all I found ...

8/10 Very attractive, JC :wink: . -Kylan

Yeah, Vonnegut is the way to go. Try: -- Slaughterhouse-5 -- Cat's Cradle -- Player Piano. Also, mental note to self: read The Sirens of Titan . -Kylan

Conrad - Superb. I enjoyed this piece supremely. It showed maturity and grace and wit: a perfect showcase of your skills and a perfect hook for a story that will ...

-August 30th- As usual, the air raid alarm went off Wednesday afternoon and the town dripped out of their front doors and headed for their designated shelters. The shelters were ...

Prolgue = prologue. If you want to be taken seriously, at least spell your titles correctly. -Kylan

-August 31st- A face. Sagging and distorted with eyes that were solar eclipses and skin that was as leathery as the wings of a hundred bats stitched together. It had ...

What time period is this in? Technically, it's in the future. Like, ten or twenty years from now. But I'm trying to make the time period as ambiguous as possible ...

Old and under construction. [spoiler]-August 9th- The birds eating popcorn kernels strewn all over the carnival grounds were like deathbed sinners partaking of left-over communion bread while the prie

Old and under construction. [spoiler][Many thanks to Sam and Conrad Rice with help on this chapter] When I look at the stars, I see a face where other people see ...

So the other day, I was at the library searching desperately for a good book. Recently, my taste in literature has taken a drastic change and instead of looking for ...

Jared - I'm very pleased you decided to post this. Once again, you've managed to structure a realistic and eerie situation and, what's more, you added a very mature twist ...