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Re: The Elephant Boy {thirteen}
She just doesn't learn. It doesn't matter how many times he spits out all those words at her. It doesn't matter how many times he has smiles like he always ...
Oct 23, 2008 -
Re: path to the water source
Look at her! that girl without her face covered up, all open and fresh, but as brown as a dripping tea bag above [chipped china]. Look at the dust in ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Featured Works Not Working?
It's dead. -Kylan
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Good news, and such
Three cheers for Smorg! -Kylan
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: The Art of Looking Down
[Picture #12] it is unrolled before me. a Persian rug with countless stories and legends and people woven inside of it. it is alive. it breathes. i have my eyes ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Two Entries for Cal's Contest
Conrad - PART I Alright. I enjoyed this one quite a lot. It was smooth and rhythmical and lean and it had a science fiction vibe to it as well. ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {twelve}
I can't help it. Buried inside of me, maybe above my heart, is a magnet with an irresistible attraction to his street. No matter how hard I try to walk ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: First Three Entries for Caligula's Contest
Conrad - You're right. This was much better than "Feather". At first, I thought that you had succumbed again to the telling monster, but as I continued to read I ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Streetwise
Many thanks, Conrad! [edited] -Kylan
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: First Three Entries for Caligula's Contest
Conrad - I really enjoyed this collection, especially the first two stories, which were both very solid, rich urban fantasy/ghostly fairtales. "Prayer" is probably the best thing I've ever seen ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {eleven}
The gun in my pocket is making me lighter. It's as if earth's gravity has decreased so that even the tiniest step I take makes me feel like I'm trapped ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Book one, book two - what's the point?
I think anything but splitting a novel up to show a change in time is probably just for show. In fact, I'm planning on separating my novella into 'books' or ...
Oct 9, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {ten}
I stand in front of the pawn shop with my thoughts in tow. Every once in a while, I have take them out for a walk, just to give them ...
Oct 7, 2008 -
Re: Streetwise
[002. Red] [Picture # 4] --- My bones, you see, are in far worse condition than even the most brittle woman of sixty-five who, if she fell down the stairs ...
Oct 4, 2008 -
Re: Maharaj The Magician [edited]
Jiggity - Admirable job. As always, your prose is rich and thoughtful and has plenty of good images and feelings woven in. I especially liked the beginning. You were in ...
Oct 3, 2008
