Kylan

Clo - Just as a disclaimer I haven't read TS Elliot's poem, so my understanding of the piece may be slightly hindered. Anyway. Fantastic. It is so rare that a ...

A/N: I finished the story today. This is the second to last chapter. -- I stepped into the church with my hat in my hands. The pews were tired factory ...

Conrad - Ha. I hate it when people jump into stories without having read what comes before and complain about being confused as well. :wink: Anyway. It's nice to see ...

Jiggity - As always, delightful. Your words are rich and well-chosen and it is always an entertaining experience to read a story of yours. You have the useful talent of ...

A/N: The passages opened and closed by double dashes are flashbacks of Peter's military experience. Speaking of which, lots of Peter in this chapter. (PS: Only two chapters left before ...

One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest by Ken Kesey. Brilliant characters and style. One for the ages. -Kylan

Conrad - I enjoyed this, as I usually enjoy your writing. I like how you contrasted the elegance of the masquerade party with the sarcastic irreverence of Melanie and Chloe. ...

All twelve jury members file into their box, like Jews filing into a shower room, all naked and white. I can see their verdict carved into their chests and making ...

Sohini - Despite the fact that this is a piece of rhyming poetry, which can go disasterously wrong, I though this was pretty good. You have this refreshing way of ...

Fantastic! -Kylan

'Tis sad news indeed. -Kylan

Conrad - So I've made three attempts to critique this and I've been interrupted each and every time. However, this also means I've read the story three times and so ...

Most definately the second image. -Kylan

A/N: I have the end planned out now, so its only a matter of time and development. The italisized portions are no longer from Charlie's POV, but from the POV ...

Jared - By far, the two entries I liked most were "Red" and "Crate", especially the latter. With these two stories you incorperated good dialogue and some delicious irony. Irony ...