Kylan

What if the parents don't approve of the child being on YWS in the first place? Good point. I was in the same situation for a long time. -Kylan EDIT: ...

What's wrong with a flat rate? -Kylan

I think that you're right to some degree. A lot of the art these days is meaningless drivel. But some of it is stimulating and thought provoking. For instance, I ...

Jared - Well, there isn't much left to critique after Jig and Squall. They hardly left me anything. But what they did address and tear apart is completely justified. Listen ...

Clo - Simply unbelievable. This poem effortlessly glides over the eyes and the tongue and has a killer closing line. The concept is wonderful, the style is simple and tasteful, ...

[22. Kiss] She got these groove fingers and this burlap dress dat scratches up against me when she move like daddy's stubble face when he blow raspberries into my stomach. ...

What about an english translation? -Kylan

New Orleans, Lousiana Our city's heavy and overheated tonight, like a fat woman sitting on her front porch steps under a Mexican sun, squinting her eyes into little pinto beans. ...

Absolutely anything by Sam and/or Suzanne. They are a writerly goddesses among us. There is also Jared's Seance Series which is fantastic, but rarely updated and Con's Masquerade Party and ...

Jiggity - This is really cool. As I said in my previous critique, this entire premise would turn to slop in anybody eles's hands and it makes the story all ...

That's terrible! -Kylan

*cracks up* Jeez, do I really sound like that? -Kylan

-- The hut was made of tin. And so the monsoon rain thrashing against it was amplified a hundred times into an orchestra pit out of tune and shrieking mournful ...

ASC NC - In the future, consider posting a more lengthy piece. With a single paragraph like this, it's hard to grasp your style and your character's personality. Avoid posting ...

I'll take 'em. -Kylan