Kylan

Yes! The first person perspective is Louis in the past, before the opening scene, from the ages of eight to sixteen, at varying times. The third person perspective is Louis ...

He leans there up against his car with his chest exposed from under his madras shirt and a cigarette hanging from his lips. The smoke he breathes out is musty ...

Paoloni was the guy who inspired me to write my first novel, which was a load of crap. But he pushed the first domino, I guess. -Kylan

Artistically, the first one is fantastic, and the last is nice as well. The others are either too blurry or they have too much background noise and/or a poorly constructed ...

Don't know em, although I do recognize Tupac. Not much one for rap, so: 2/10 1.) Feel Good Inc. - Gorillaz 2.) Oil and Water - Incubus 3.) From Me ...

A/N: Another experimental piece. Also, sometimes the italisizing doesn't work too well on entire passages, so for your reference, sections two and four should be italisized entirely. -- the moon ...

We've all been influenced by authors. Our writerly styles are molded by what we read and what we surround ourselves with. And so I think it would be interesting if ...

9/10 for Tenacious D 1.) Believe - Cher 2.) Long Train Runnin' - The Doobie Brothers 3.) Hide - Red 4.) Canon in D for strings - Pachelbel 5.) Inside ...

Conrad - Interesting, as always. You're definately contructing a different kind of character. Very unique. I can't wait to see all the dimensions add to him. But I have to ...

1/10. Sorry, but I recognize none of these. Paradise City - Guns N' Roses The Son Never Shines (On Closed Doors) - Flogging Molly The Jester - Sum 41 Animal ...

Alright, things make sense now. And I completely understand that you were not able to fit all that information into 5,000 words. Like I said: the writing itself is very ...

Jiggity - Wow. This was beautiful in its emotions and subtleties. I don't know why you hate it so much. It's really a pretty good piece of work and I'm ...

Jiggity - A thorough, solid introduction. Not as captivating or interesting a topic as Stars , but, as always, you managed to take a cliched scene and make it your ...

A/N: Hopefully everyone will find this chapter more eventful. 'Tis a tad longish. ** Louis places his hand on the neck of the mare and rubs it with his open ...

What quality is most present in your story? But really, when it all boils down, where you put your story won't matter a whole lot. Romance can have fantasy and ...