Kylan

Thank you everyone! I want to list here some of the changes I will be making to this piece: 1.) I will be introducing Gil's POV earlier on in the ...

A/N: So here is the second draft. I would appreciate comments on any additions/subtractions from the story. I would especially appreciate the added passage of Gil's POV. -- – goddess, ...

Louis spreads himself across Bo's back, lying with his dry, open mouth against the base of her neck, inhaling the stale smell of her skin, the way the inside of ...

Jiggity - Fantastic! Much more rich and smoothly delivered than part one. I enjoyed this immensely. Sometimes, you just gotta strain to get good things, I guess, right? Everything was ...

Commandments of the Muse - I must write on the computer - I must check YWS before writing - I chew on my nails and bite the skin around the ...

A/N: This my first attempt at lyrics, for BBB's contest. Tea party smiles and cold, polite hands. Driftwood hollowness and castle sands. A kiss on the cheek, pure and virgin. ...

Rock Rise Against: Post-hardcore, extremely well-written lyrics, and catchy riffs. If you want an adrenaline rush and you want a revolution, this high-minded, cerebral band is for you. AC/DC: Classic ...

Duskfield One foot in front of the other, they slump forward, limp and wilted as ladies in the heat. Their hatbrims cup the sun and their faces are broken affairs, ...

Jared - Ah. Finally, the last installment. It wasn't disappointing either. You did well with this and I found myself held very much in suspense throughout. Great job. However, this ...

Connie - I enjoyed this! A very nice addition to this piece. There were a couple lines of dialogue I saw that were pure gold and, as Jiggity said, your ...

Nixon - I loved this. Fantastic rhythm, fantastic descriptions. Subtle and abstract, yet laden with meaning at the same time, a delicate and easily upset sort of promised land. You ...

A/N: After chapter six, everything picks up. -- On weekends, Maria takes me up to some stables that my father holds in Glenville. He never goes up there himself, though. ...

[three fountains retirement center] Their skin. It is like butcherpaper. Crinkled and rough, it folds and droops over old driftwood bones that grind together. They sit in their evening chairs. ...

Jiggity - Very nice. Very nice, indeed. I'm really looking forward to more of this, though in smaller portions. I specifically enjoyed The Whistler, which I recall being in the ...

6/10: Rise Against and The Offspring, baby! 1.) Doin' Time - Sublime 2.) Baby - Serj Tankian 3.) Please Remain Calm - Cloud Cult 4.) Pas De Cheval - Panic ...