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Jared - I didn't like this. I realize you were more or less forced into writing this, and that this is probably your first draft and I also realize that ...

Gahks - This was good, if not a little predictable and overused. You obviously have a confident grasp on the intracasies of the poetic language. Now, I think, you just ...

Conrad - I'm interested to know where you plan on taking Creep. In other words, I'm interested to know what kind of plot twists you have in store for us, ...

Ha. They wouldn't kill me if I lied about my age, right? -Kylan

A/N: I've started writing this again. -- I sit in the bathroom on the toilet for two hours, with my pants on and the seat down. I feel all lazy ...

Clo - I like this piece. At first, I didn't, but after reading it a second time and putting into perspective with the title, it kinda grew on me. The ...

Hold it in, a lecherous, sickly bulb with little white hairs growing from it, twining into the dirt, sucking, hot and black and lazy inside like texas oil. Weed it ...

Love McCarthy, love The Road. -Kylan

Winter's Twelfth Night >> Thank you very much for your comments! I'm glad you enjoyed the piece. However, I feel like I need to point out a couple things. 1.) ...

I sit here on the steps of the old baptist church, crying a little bit. Th sun is so bright that it hurts to look at the white of my ...

Conrad - I thought that there was a little too much telling here, and I'm not sure how I feel about being addressed directly (the whole second-person bit) -- it ...

Angel - It's been a while since I've looked at anything of yours, and so I'm assuming that this story is written using a new, experimental style. It's nice to ...

Welcum 2 YWS. No chat speak. -Kylan

Sylvia Plath. -Kylan

AudreyViolet6 -- There comes a point were abstract poetry is no longer poetry at all. I saw a poem once - a published one - where all it was was ...