Kylan

Not so much of a fan of the rhyming, but I applaud you for trying something new. 3.5 is fun and easily likable. I really enjoy the "eggplant body" image. ...

April 5 chimneysweep the chimneysweeps are out tonight, crawling over the tin towers, the sluggish, toothless grins, scrubbing, steeling, brushes hairy as insect legs, the soot disturbed, rising until

April 4 electroluminescent their laughs bleed through the heavy night, and the trees are light-footed, nightgowned in moondusted leaves. the electric light hums and the generator seethes, the gnats an

#3 makes me smile. Gotta love the word epistemological. And Clo. You realize that I consider you one of the best poets on this site? -Kylan

And yet, you find a way to top yourself. Although, I can't help remember a time when you critisized me for my combiningofwords. Maybe it's for poetry and not fiction. ...

Yeah. April o2 is pretty much fantastic. I loved the uncontrolled, unexpected nature of it. The ordered words, the succinct beauty. Awesome. I want more. -Kylan

A/N: This one I like. April 3 Timshel -- The Whore iii. here, we deal in soul. this is our currency. the register you hear, a ringing up of items ...

Thank you two! I feel like I need to address this: There is still something, though... I want everyone to know that I hate this sentence, too. But I couldn't ...

April 2 Timshel -- The Dreamer ii. beneath my feet, there is a premonition merely a suggestion of possibilities. it is buried, with a sucking, mewling voice, it reaches and ...

george is brilliant. You've got a lovely contemporary style -- new and hip, with a dash of classicalism, without sounding too dissonant. A few lines are reminiscent of the chaotic ...

A/N: Pretty short, this one. Mainly because the next POV section is about 2,000 words and I didn't want to post a combined chapter of over three thousand words. Kids ...

Interesting. I'm quite fond of stanza one. Consider looking into punctuation. It's a marvelous thing. Also! I've got to say that the meaning of this is pretty convoluted. I know ...

You know, I've always been jealous of people who can write short poetry. Mainly because I love it so much. Strong meaning here. I like the carefully chosen words. The ...

April 1 Timshel -- The Elders i. these little mud creatures, rotting in their sex and their contraband, their stolen breath, lifted from our pockets: the sticky-sweet of breath and ...

Ink runs from the corners of my mouth There is no happiness like mine. I have been eating poetry. ~Mark Strand, "Eating Poetry," Reasons for Moving, 1968 I'm pretty sure ...