Kylan

Haha! I practice my signature, too. All the time. Since seventh grade I've been honing the signature I'd use to sign the copies of my novel that adoring fans will ...

Honestly, I don't want to read this until you change the grammar error in your title. -Kylan

June -- This was good. Solid stuff. As someone else mentioned, not overly appealing as an introduction, but you've painted a fairly relatable character for the audience to sympathize with. ...

A/N: definately a different plot format for me -- no one died. -- See the faces. All the ugly, smushed faces. The shriveled, crabapple eyes. Cheeks as red and swollen ...

Love -- Definately shocking. And well-written as always. I'm still kind of at a loss for words, for multiple reasons. Let's address the writing first. I think you captured the ...

Locked by the request of the author. In the future people, please only review recent pieces. No one likes a necroposter. -Kylan

Song: The Rake's Song (The Decemberists) 025. antagonist -- They submerge me in the warm bathwater, knees and belly surfacing, my lungs collapsing like paper fans. I can barely breath. ...

jones32 -- There are bits and pieces of this poem that I like very much, but on the whole, they are choked out by unoriginal language and a lackluster, half-hearted ...

song: Strip My Mind (Red Hot Chilli Peppers) 008. episode -- figment: your pearly intangibles percolating on my breath & farming my dreams. the nonsense spooling, collecting, like condolences. i ...

mizz-iceberg -- This piece looked lonely. And you've critiqued stuff of mine before. Here's to returning favors. Anyway, this is respectable. It's not particularly memorable and it kind of sinks ...

I edited your post so that your author's note does not stretch the page out. In the future, treat anything you type out in the post box like the poem ...

Eimear -- I really like the concept behind this piece, especially how you portrayed a relationship/love as a business transaction. It's a unique take on things, for me at least. ...

song: Monsters (Matchbox Romance) 003. anagnorisis A/N: I think this needs some help. I'm not so hot about narrative poetry. -- it is raining tin roof chattering, gnawing, plague of ...

stolenHearts -- Basically, what you have here is an emo poem in the advanced stages. While I enjoyed your first four line very much, I felt that the message you ...

fuzzyhead – it looks like you just woke up, griping, stripping up through the layered slumber, exiting like a baby. you nod, bend, spine of grace, the lipless smile, the ...